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Old 04-10-2008, 08:24 AM   #1
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Old 04-10-2008, 12:36 PM   #2
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Hi Thanoz,

I didn't read the whole review... I'm feeling lazy now

Anyway, how about changing this:
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"... Everyone was speaking about it with the best words and i couldn’t not to give it a try! ..."
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"... I got a few great reviews about it from some friends and I just couldn’t afford not to give it a try! ..."
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Old 04-10-2008, 12:42 PM   #3
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Hmm, i want it to make it look like i found that myself just by hearing rumours about it.
The sentence you suggest is way more formal but i want to look more like "user-friendly" some way. i want it to look as if i was just surfing the net, i had in mind what some friends said and i joined their website.
Something like this! I'll think of it! Thanks for feedback!
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The website is cool. Good graphics!. Shiny one. Lots of cool stuff . I personally like the website.
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Well, I am feeling lazy too..but I am a responsible admin lol :D

Anyways, What Ikki said will make the post formal. What you want is user-friendly. If it is like that, then the post is quite OKAY. You could change some punctuations though. [My English is not too good]
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Ok ok... maybe I was too formal xD
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Formality is one of the plus points of my personality lol. You know how "informal" I am on MSN. :p
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